Bus drivers were playing mischievous games to the passengers
and Haroun was watching from a distance. then he said its not fair out loud and a jolly fellow named mr butt herd and commented correct but funny to watch. he was quite big and rather funny looking . they watch clouds bang in to each other and laughed at the scenery .mr butt bowed at Haroun and said at your service to Haroun. they introduced themselves to each other then Haroun had a excellent idea.
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February 20, 2015 at 12:37 pm
Hello,
You have shown some clear understanding of this chapter, however, your paragraph does not flow because you have written in only simple and compound sentences.
Targets:
1) Re-draft this paragraph, using a variety of sentence structures.
2) Use a quotation to support your understanding.